first chapter of my book, would you keep on reading?
Wednesday, August 31st, 2011 at
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It’s not bad but there are no cliffhangers that make me want to read on. The description is brilliant but it seems very ordinary, there’s nothing special that jumps out to me and makes me keep reading to find out what happens. but it’s good nonetheless
Try to read one or two more chapters if its intresting ceep reading if not dont read it
it is OK but there is still room for improvement.
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