I'm writing a story, READ THIS AND TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT!?
This is just part of the beginning of the book, I just need you to tell me what you think.
Good or Bad. I just want to know
I gasped in surprise as the monotone of beeps coming from my alarm clock, interrupted my previous dream. I had no intention of being annoyed, the dream I experienced made me tremble, waking me up in cold sweat at three in the morning. I lay in my plush bed silently, gripping the black silk sheets hoping to stop trembling, to grab hold of my fear, and let it go. I couldn’t force myself to believe the five words I have been trying to convince myself of the past week. I would continuously tell myself it was nothing more than a dream, still a week after I first started having the horrid dream of the shadows, I could not believe those words. I knew, some part in the back of my mind knew that the shadows were as much as real as the sky, and possibly as inevitable as breathing. Every night it was the same lucid dream, the shadows whispering in there scratchy voices. Even as I lay here in bed remembering their voice I tremble and cringe, and remember as their voices emit a screech, like nails on a chalk board. I controlled my breathing, so I was no longer gasping for air, my chest rose and fell rapidly. I closed my eyes for a moment, trying to clear my mind free of the shadows, trying to rid the dreadful feeling that they could see me as well as I could see them.
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